You have planned your idea out really well and seem to know a lot about it for this presentation. You're calm, prepared, and seemingly excited about the prospect of this idea. The video is probably a little longer than it needs to be, so I definitely recommend cutting it down and condensing your material. Good luck to you! You obviously seem excited
I liked how you used sources to back up claims of the effect of heat in the body. It was a good technique to remind customers why they would need the product. Many people have suffered from heat in cars. I also found interesting that you switched to an air conditioner powered through solar panels. Your pitch highlighted the key features of the product. I agree with Danny on the suggestion that the pitch could be closer to 90 seconds, so I think that later pitches could be made shorter.
Hi Uri. I enjoyed how you introduced yourself with your title/position at your company. This lends real credit to your pitch when speaking to your audience. Additionally, beginning with the statistics regarding temperatures and their effects on the human body were intriguing and a great hook. Also, your slow steady pace throughout the pitch was spot on and easy to follow. I agree with the previous comments that the pitch could be trimmed. Perhaps this could be achieved by trimming the amount of statistics provided.
You have planned your idea out really well and seem to know a lot about it for this presentation. You're calm, prepared, and seemingly excited about the prospect of this idea. The video is probably a little longer than it needs to be, so I definitely recommend cutting it down and condensing your material. Good luck to you! You obviously seem excited
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ReplyDeleteI liked how you used sources to back up claims of the effect of heat in the body. It was a good technique to remind customers why they would need the product. Many people have suffered from heat in cars. I also found interesting that you switched to an air conditioner powered through solar panels. Your pitch highlighted the key features of the product. I agree with Danny on the suggestion that the pitch could be closer to 90 seconds, so I think that later pitches could be made shorter.
Hi Uri. I enjoyed how you introduced yourself with your title/position at your company. This lends real credit to your pitch when speaking to your audience. Additionally, beginning with the statistics regarding temperatures and their effects on the human body were intriguing and a great hook. Also, your slow steady pace throughout the pitch was spot on and easy to follow. I agree with the previous comments that the pitch could be trimmed. Perhaps this could be achieved by trimming the amount of statistics provided.
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