Great job shortening your speech! I too had some trouble keeping it to the amount of time needed, but this came off as very well done. You seem confident and excited, as well as knowledgeable about your subject. I would recommend trying to focus more on the camera and less on your tablet, but other than that, fantastic work! You seem dedicated in improving your craft
Uri, your shortening of your speech was done very well. While I didn’t have the same problem, I can see the usefulness in keeping an elevator pitch short and to the point. What you could improve on is your presentation, which for the most of the time, you were looking at your iPad. This is not that hard to improve, but other than that, well done.
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ReplyDeleteGreat job shortening your speech! I too had some trouble keeping it to the amount of time needed, but this came off as very well done. You seem confident and excited, as well as knowledgeable about your subject. I would recommend trying to focus more on the camera and less on your tablet, but other than that, fantastic work! You seem dedicated in improving your craft
ReplyDeleteUri, your shortening of your speech was done very well. While I didn’t have the same problem, I can see the usefulness in keeping an elevator pitch short and to the point. What you could improve on is your presentation, which for the most of the time, you were looking at your iPad. This is not that hard to improve, but other than that, well done.
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