Hi Uri. Your pace was much improved and perfect for the understanding of the statistical information you were providing. I enjoy how you provide the details on why this product is needed in the marketplace. However, it would also be good to hear more about the actual product. Finding that balance in the script can be difficult. Next time however, I would suggest checking the angle of the video before recording the final pitch. For a majority of this video only half of your face is visible.
Uri, the pitch that you just gave was your best one yet. Your pace was much better than your 2nd pitch and it is something you can keep improving on. The hook that you gave was very compelling and should be worrying to people who drive in that kind of heat. One thing I would improve is the camera angle you are using because it is hard to see your face in many instances.
Very good! Your pace is great but I suppose it could still be a little shorter. Also you should definitely expand on what your end goal is and what your project will be like in the end, and I agree with Jenna that you should adjust your angle and make sure you can more clearly be seen. But your presentation is fantastic! Good work
Hi Uri. Your pace was much improved and perfect for the understanding of the statistical information you were providing. I enjoy how you provide the details on why this product is needed in the marketplace. However, it would also be good to hear more about the actual product. Finding that balance in the script can be difficult. Next time however, I would suggest checking the angle of the video before recording the final pitch. For a majority of this video only half of your face is visible.
ReplyDeleteUri, the pitch that you just gave was your best one yet. Your pace was much better than your 2nd pitch and it is something you can keep improving on. The hook that you gave was very compelling and should be worrying to people who drive in that kind of heat. One thing I would improve is the camera angle you are using because it is hard to see your face in many instances.
ReplyDeleteVery good! Your pace is great but I suppose it could still be a little shorter. Also you should definitely expand on what your end goal is and what your project will be like in the end, and I agree with Jenna that you should adjust your angle and make sure you can more clearly be seen. But your presentation is fantastic! Good work
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